Short... But, nice work...
Keep up this good work...

Great poem... just saw one thing... instead of sters, it's stirs... great idea for the poem though man :)

Dangg that's pretty deep.
You worded it like perfectly.
I like this piece a lott.
Keep the good work up!

Awesomly written. Short but excelent, keep it up.5/5

Love this poem, still :]

WOW! this is really good! I like it keep up the good work!