YOU ARE GONNA BREAK MY HEART IF U LEAVE ME :(

That was a great piece, although the flow was really jagged at some points, still really good.
Please keep writing, you have lots of talent =)

Take care,
xxxxx

Aww. That was really good. I really hope this wasn't your last poem by the way.

Wonderful

Dat was really gud!

Hey you :)
im sorry that it took me so long to check out your new poems, but this is a great poem. a little rough around the edges, but i really like it. i really hope this isn't your last piece of poetry though... you are seriously gifted my dear. take care and hope to read more from you one day :)
-xox-