Adel,

I understand your pain...hang on in ther lil bro. In time a solution will come..

hugs,

Ingrid

"I thought you will raise me high but you threw me on the floor"
This is so typical from a girl, lol;)

"To make you see that YOU who I need" I think you can change this part to "To make you see its YOU who I need"

but again all ur poems r simoly amazin

ur fan
~gIrL~

WOW.. Really n-i-c-e work. :D

;( to much sadness in the world! to much peepz that hurt peepz feelingz and breakz their heartz!!! great poem btw keep up great worx

Its great , so sad, more pain, great end when you say:So should I cut? Should I bleed?
To make you see it's YOU who I need
Should I raise my voice when I cry?
To let you know that I am about to die
If this is a battle I already gave up
If this is a game I am already Fed up
And just to let you know the time is up
So I beg you my love please show up.

great jop

DEEP. I love it.

Well done.

Its always easy to say how much we hated the person who caused us pain but it takes some time or an entire life to some to really get over the love you have for them...I admire you for the time u took and will take to wait for that person...I admire you for all the courages to smile and carry on each and everyday patiently waitin and i really hope one day she'll find the way back to you..

The emotions you have vividly portrayed are all to real for anyone that has felt the pain of love in their life.

I wish I could tell you that the pain will go away, but it seems to always hurt a little no matter how many years go by. There is always that sense of loss and "what if".

Keep writing and let the paper know your pain. Though it sounds redicules, it is very theraputic.

I found one tine grammer error in the poem that kinda threw me off just a little...

"I hate you because you were a faking star
Now I can see who truly you are
And I hate myself too for opening my door
I thought you will raise me high but you threw me on the floor"

I believe that it should read " I thought you would raise me up"

Other than that it was very inspirational. It allows others to see that they are not the only one to experience this love, anger, hate, and pain all in one.

~~Sher

It's a great one , wallah
it's very impressive and touch my heart soooo much coz i really feel what u feel exactely :p
excellent poem

Wow!!! I love the ending... nice poem 5/5

Aww, i think we can all relate 2 this poem. 5/5
xoxo
~me~

Wow !!! simply amazing, goes right through the heart.

"And I hate myself even more for failing to hate you
What I have discovered that I can only love you
So should I cut? Should I bleed?
To make you see it's YOU who I need
Should I raise my voice when I cry?
To let you know I am about to die
If this is a battle I already gave up
If this is a game I am already Fed up
And just to let you know the time is up
So I beg you my love please show up."

Amazing !!!