This poem was Amazing!
I can defnitally relate...I hope things get better for you =]
Good Poem!

I really appreciate this poem. It's very good.

Whoa, that was a bumpy ride.
the flow was a bit off, but it was sweet.

the last stanza was a disappointment, you overused "you."

otherwise, it was a pretty sweet poem.
i liked it (:

Yo
i love this!!! its so... heartfelt for lack of a better word.
youre not alone weve all felt this way at one time or another.
thank you for writing this :)
-miranda

This is a great poem
i love how u discribed eveything u loved about her so cute