Dear Mr. Darcy,

Wonderful poem, if you had an illustrator you could publish this as a childrens book

I enjoyed reading this and you have a refreshing style.

How sweet I can imagine lots of little lads thinking the same X

I swam with the penguins then wadded ashore,
Where a gray parrot squawked 'barbecue at four'
^^^
OMG I love these lines .... they sure did make me laugh.

Very creative write you've penned here. The eight words in each line must of been quite a challenge but you made it look so easy. And the rhyme scheme was fantastic!

Such a delightful poem to read today, it sure did make my day much brighter. You've spun a tale that takes one back to younger days when magical dreams filled our hearts with joy.

This write is both magical and soothing to the mind. And just whisks my heart away with joy.

I wish I could nominate it for the front pages but it seems my nomination button is gone or no longer can we nominate funny poems. I will be sure to check back again to see if my button re-appears.
A definite front page winner as far as I'm concerned!
Excellent write and a fabulous read!
Luanne

Hehehe it made me feel like i was reading a childrens book. i don't know if that was your intention but it was great!!!

I would read this to my children! Loved it! Amazing!