This one is amazing dear.

Knowing this is all a dream
Yet it's one I won't set free
I need you here to dry my tears
Giving all your love to me

what this life would be without dreams, am glad to know that u r holding on and wont let go ur dreams.

great poem dear.

all the best and take care

This was a very sad read, the emotion felt through out was almost to much to bear. A very moving and heartfelt piece.. well done CC

Cindy,

So much sadness portrayed...the 10th of March must be a very difficult day for you each year...
Beautiful dedication to your beloved one..
*hugs you tight*
Love,

Ingrid

So sad Cindy...never let go your dreams...someday they will come true and you will be reunited with John. We all misss him too.

Cindy ~wipes tear~ with ink as your tears you have moved me beyond anything with this dedication.
I LOVE YA HUN .... ~wipes your tears~ always and forever here for you my friend

I'm so sorry, yet again. Be strong, keep hanging in there..

Locked tightly in loves embrace
One day together we will be
Reunited for evermore
Two of us through eternity

great stanza. i am so sorry for your loss, i am sure that it is hard. =[ this poem really painted a picture in my head...i sense a lot of love here...keep up the great work.

I love it..
but i love all ur poems
This is beautiful
i love u cin!
*Shan*

Such a lovley poem ,my thoughts are with you.

Brilliant touching poem, sorry for your loss

Knowing this is all a dream
Yet it's one I won't set free
I need you here to dry my tears
Giving all your love to me

^ this is amazingly sweet. anyone who has lost a loved one can completely understand this.

you captured such an amazing longing and heartache in these simple words. wonderous job. and i am sorry for your loss. god bless.

Very nicely done! & I'm sorry for your loss! You expressed youself really well in this piece. I liked it alot. Flow was nice. And it was full of emotions that anyone could feel and relate to. Keep it up!

Beautiful sensational & tender... You're a gifted amazing writer...5/5 keep writing

I realy understand the why you wrote this poem.. when the memories of our loved one hurt us inside we cry and want to share our emotions to who we care. but how sad for who we write they were not with us. and we cry for them.

i am really sorry about the death of your husband.. maybe this is life and we have to accpet every circumstance.

i do respect your this poem and i do respect you more than every person on this website. great work ....