Comments : I'm Not

  • 16 years ago

    by CWG

    Good poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by keithnwv

    Your message is so clear. very well done!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    I love this one! Can definitely relate to it! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dennis

    Learning from past mistakes is what makes us stronger and wiser for the future. You've learned very well my dear friend!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    I can only ever be me
    Busy with your women debris
    So easily you forgot
    Who I'm not
    ^^^
    Hold your head up high girl because this ending stanza paints the picture of who you are .... and your morals shine in this ending stanza.

    The title screams to me and the content though sad in part .... leads up to an absolute brilliant ending.

    With your barstool for a throne
    Leaving me to sleep alone
    Not one of your easy "lady" barflies
    Being tried on for size
    ^^^
    Your verse screams ... Hell NO I'm NOT putting up with this. Excellent!

    Luanne