Please Read (back to the beginning)

by Mey   Mar 7, 2008


Just back to the beginning....

Now I am just trying to delete past memories like if they were just files on a cabinet, waiting for that predicted time. That one moment we all knew it would come sooner or later. It hurts of course, is like a killer, like a criminal waiting for its next victim, but I was trying my best on being preparer for it. Because life does not always go the way we always wanted. Life is an UN-expectant dark treasure and Golden painful knife, but full of unusual experiences. Which we should never let for granted.

Let me know what you think of this please. I know is not a poem, but is something I came up Minutes after someone hurt my feelings

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    It has some emotions but you need to write it in a proper way. Try to structure in better way.

  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    I think it tells alot, maybe if you took a little bit more time and put more emotion in it it would be great, but i like it i think its good <333