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You are awesome:] It just caught me and I loved it. awesome job.5/5
by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life
Not bad. could be a little better. i like the last part
"this is all a soliloquy,
one shrouded in validity,
one saturated with insanity,
was it really because of me?"
this gives the poem its finishing touch. keep it up!