Comments : The Duel

  • 14 years ago

    by FallingAngel

    You are awesome:] It just caught me and I loved it. awesome job.5/5

  • Not bad. could be a little better. i like the last part
    "this is all a soliloquy,
    one shrouded in validity,
    one saturated with insanity,
    was it really because of me?"
    this gives the poem its finishing touch. keep it up!