This is a nice poem, very honest too. Love the ending, so true, only we can change the world. 5/5
Nicole

Wow amazing!.. unfortunately all that is true in this world that we are all living in but yet no one takes the time to change it.

Your world; Change it.

I love the ending. It really hits you and leaves you thinking.. well how can i change it? You did a great job writing this poem.

It would be really interesting to see this poem written with the opposite tone... the good things in life you know?..

nice job! keep it up. 5/5 from me.

Very good discriptions in this poem. You have a way of putting an edge on whatever you write for sure. I loved the tension in this poem it really stood out to me. Even though it was a short one which is just how it is sometimes. It was really good for me
5/5

Wowie. I can never write acrostic poems. I've tried, but they turn out horrible. So, greay job on actually being about to write one. :]

The things you said in it were so very true. There's violence everywhere. Especially where I live. The ending was very powerful.

"Your world, change it". I mean wow. If everyone tried to change the world just a little bit, it would be a much more better place to live.

I love it. :]

Keep writing!
Cayce

Incredible, sweetheart.
I loved it; the flow was great.
The last line sealed the whole poem.
Perfect ending.
5/5
Lovce you
xxxx

I like the flow here. The last lime ends it nicely. :]