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  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Wow.. short but simple and to the point.. a very inspirational set of lines that anyone and everyone should live by

    nice job! it takes real talent to say so much with so few words.

    Thanks for the comment on my poem =)

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Nice message here! Here are some thoughts:

    "You'll be famous,
    you'll be heard,
    your the voice, the only word.
    you'll be respected
    without a cause.
    you will make it, through it all."

    Maybe this:

    "You'll be famous,
    And clearly heard,
    You're the voice,
    The only word.
    You'll be respected,
    Without a cause,
    You will make it,
    Through it all."

    If you don't like what I put, then don't change it! I love what you put, and I was just thinking maybe those changes might make your poem a bit better. Great work!

  • 15 years ago

    by Kayla

    Confidence building.
    ahah dont ask?