Comments : I love you but do you love me?

  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless Watermelon

    Full of emotion and you obviously want somebody to know how you feel, but you're afraid that they don't feel the same way. you put into words what a lot of people feel, and you did it very successfully and you did leave out a rhyme scheme but sometimes a poem doesn't need to rhyme. I think you did an awesome job and i hope you write more like it ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by MEMI

    Wow i know how you feel