Once again another powerful poem filled with emotion...

And I can't blame her,
because I'm the one at fault.
I'm sorry.

I like the way you ended the poem.. like you know there is nothing else you can do but to say sorry.. i really enjoyed reading it.. sorry that it's such a sad poem... i hope it's not true..

thanks for the comments!

You still seem pretty amature in your writings, but keep on writing either way, you will get better in time.

"I'm dieing inside"
it should be
"I'm dying inside"
little typo.

5/5

Yeah I wish it was'nt.

This poem is filled with such power and emotion..5/5

I really like it, you put so much emotion into it. A lot of meaning behind your words

Confused on the meaning, but still, it's really good!

Excellent

I loved the sincerity and truthful on this. Very powerful piece. I liked your style.

Keep it up
Veamm

Sorry for the delay.
Thanks

This is sweet good work

This is sweet good work