Great job the emotions are powerfull yet subtle. you did an awesome job.5/5

The way this was written was amazing. You've managed to use 2 different lines "Because I don't want to hurt you anymore" and "I wish that I could leave you alone" in every other line effectively. This has a lot of emotion, and it's very well written. 5/5 and I'm adding you to my favs! Great work!

It well good. good work but painful