I don't know about other people but upon reading this i get a very negative picture from this. :S

The structure could have been set out a little better (ill send u an email to show you what I mean)

Moving on... a very moving poem from my little miss bunny :D

5/5 ~ FountainsOfBlood

Wonderful poem sister. Bitterness and love played a huge part...it made meh cry! X.x hah I want u and ur dad to spend sum quailty time together! u need to tell him, DAD I NEED SUM TLC! Tell him wut is going on. Tell him ur suspiciousions....i no it may beh hard, but sumtimes u need to do it. I do it to my dad...to my mom? itz impossible. she wont listen :P but anyway, in this poem, i felt the rivalry of love and hate.
Great job...

But one question...

What would u rather feel toward ur father?
Love...?
Hate...?
Whichever (ima guessing love :D) U need to tell him that u love him, and u want to change things.

Anyway, this is getting long sissy XD
Love u!!!

--**skye~

O.O omgosh, i love it, so much emotion. wow sis your such a great writer and a poet!
dont worry i love you for you and you'll always have me to look down at you so you can look up to me for guidance. ^.^

5/5

♥your big bro.
travtrav

Ahhhhh, this is so good..and sad.. at the same time, i got goose bumps while reading it, feeling the emotions , *sighs* i m sorry about that...ur father changing and all, i wish u good luck for a happy end :) i really do.. and i think i know very well. how it is to ,lose' his father.... well i dont want to talk about it in a comment lol, so maybe an other time ;) but hell ITS DAMN GOOD the poem i mean :)

Very Strong and Like the presnet was sad I mean why do families change like that?