Very good job on writing this. Although it was short, it had a beautiful flow, and the concept was deep. Very great job 5/5

This one stanza seemed so great...and unfortunately, that was it :( haha. You've haveeee toooo add more. Despite the fact that this is all you have, it looks very promising :).

And no, I do not recognize you...oddly enough haha. No clue how I got on your buddy list haha.

5/5

Very short yet it stands out
Great job
=]

Beautiful! Very short and gorgeous!!!!!!!!

5/5

"Paint the canvas of life with a rainbow of hues:
from the color of the setting sun,
to that of the morning dew."

WOW hehe only ONE line to go over? haha
well I loved it to be honest, it was very pretty.

One thing is I would love to have read more.
You left me hanging!

:(

PM me if u ever write on from this

and yet again
well done
^_^