Good write 5 out 5

Very very good.i loved it:)

OMG Its cute, i enjoy it lol ((5))

Cool poem! i loved it, i give it a 5/5!!

Oooh, Youve turned such a natural thing into something really... eerie and disturbing!!!

Very clever-very well done.

5/5
Aish
xx

Wow out of 10 i give this a 20 lol it was god really made me think of what i'm going through lol