This poem is soo sad... :[ but very good! 5/5

Wow, this is really good. there's so much emotion, and i love how you also asked questions instead of just writing line after line...
great job
5/5

Sandra

Great poem very emotional

Its good but the way you wrote it made it the most interesting. good job keep up the good work :D

Oh wow. that's so amazing. we are all blind children in a way, if you think about it. and none of us should EVER be alone.

Please come back. I
do not like being alone.
The tears run down my
face like a waterfall.

^ wow. just wow....

this is my favorite poem by you so far!! write more!!! ^_^