There is somthing about ur writing that takes me away from were i am, but please dont cut, please, its somthing that i hate, if it really helped u wouldnt have to keep doing it. so its false. but good poem, even if i hate wat its about

Wo hat was such a heavy piece not kidding it was so like toching i loved it it was so emotional in a way

great job

I really like ur poems,
good thing you asked me to read it.
really good.

I like this one alott because i can relate to it. some of my poems are like this but i think yours is better written. 5/5

I love this poem becos its like me and its well written!
love it!
xo

You have pretty good poems:)

Wow great poem! 5/5!

Should I call someone for help
Or should I just lay here and die?
Would it even matter to anyone?
Would anyone even cry?
--describes the confusion of the suicidal well
I won't be missed by anyone
--friends and family would
good poem,just like how well you described the struggle and your thoughts

Thats not true that nobody will miss you, I'm sure you have plenty of friends and family who would beh eartbroken if this happen. In my personal opinion calling for help in this situation would do no good because the only person who can help you is yourself. Good job on this piece, you let people into your life through your poetry and that is often hard to do...5/5 GG23