Comments : With her he is complete....

  • 16 years ago

    by withlove

    Nice poem
    i like the 5th stanza especially
    i hope u find someone who makes you happier
    =D

  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    OMG ik what u mean I have been through this and actually I kinda feel like this right now.
    Good Job

  • 16 years ago

    by IcAnMaKeIt

    This poem made me cry beacause it described one of my old relatetionships..omg!!!!!!! 5/5 esp.the last stanza

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentlyDyingInside

    Omg this is a great poem u r a great writer

  • 16 years ago

    by Cross

    I know exactly what you mean. I really liked it :P. Very well written.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Wow the poem was good. it had stong meaning to it.great emotion too. u did a very good job esp. writting about something that hurts that bad. I believe every grl that reads this will totally love it! keep ur chin up and ur great work! 5/5 always
    Kate~

  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    Girl this a hotttt poem and i dig every word you are saying. I don't know what to say about this but DANGGGG!!!! I feel this deeply. keep up the excellent work.

  • Love ths as always go u babe your amazing....5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I hate it when you ask them, searching desperately
    for what you need to hear, "do you still love me?"
    even when you know their answer is just a lie, for
    that insignificant moment, the pain is at a lesser degree

    ^^I agree with this Tabi, sometimes you would rather hear a lie than the cold hard truth....
    You worded your emotions really well in this piece:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid