This is good

Hey very good work.... nice poem...
dats how i feel wen i hv to select a topic to write about...

good job..

keep up..

Very nice.
i like your structure.
i like the uniqueness of it.
-alicia..

This is cute. The flow is good and many people can relate to this.

O.O WOWWWWWWWWWWWWW......... I LOVE THIS POEM!! nice way with words!!

-travis-

I realllllllly liked ur poemm....

All the poets will agree to your wonderful expression, you are even successful in pouring the confused thought.