Comments : Time goes on

  • 16 years ago

    by Morgan

    I like it!!

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wonderful poem, such words of wisdom.
    i loved this one moste:
    "You can choose love or hate it's all the same
    It does not matter as they can both bring pain."

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. It is very true. It had a nice flow to it. I only wish that it was longer.

  • Again, it's good but doesn't try adding the commas on every line. I liked a lot though. It's a very beautiful poem. Doesn't have as much feeling/ emotion in it, but it's still good. Good job!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    A poem full of words of wisdom! I like it... very creative and well-thought out. 5/5 for sure. The structure was a little off, but it didn't stop it from being a great poem! good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Darien

    Sad, but true. Love does hurt, a lot more than hate ever could. A short simple write. Nicely done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Ouch. The emotions in here were so strong and I could really feel what you were saying. The flow was great and nothing seemed forced. Well done, I enjoyed readin this. *5/5*