Comments : The Last Rose

  • 16 years ago

    by Kitten

    What a preaty poem and good rhyme sceme too

  • 16 years ago

    by xxxlOvElY sWeEtHeArTxxx

    I love this poem, it is very discreptive..and the way u worded this poem was absolutly amazing

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow
    this is a nice piece of writing you have here
    I really enjoyed it
    It was refreshing and an easy read
    Not too many hidden meanings or thinking envolved
    I liked this piece nice work
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    WOW. I absolutely loved the last line. It took my breath away.
    I only have one suggestion, add punctuation. That tends to bother some people, and I think adding some periods, and commas, will add some effect to it.

    I enjoyed it =)
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm that was very awesome thoughts.... the words was truly means alot! and its kinda perfect portraying bout life. the structure is totally great... it flowed well 5/5 keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Excellently penned... very impressive work..

    "Like a revelation that silently warns
    That the beauty lies above the thorns"

    very true... loved it...

  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    Really nincce poem.=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose

    *smiles* I really enjoyed reading your poem. It flows nicely and is easy to read. It is a great poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Its pretty with flowery words.
    i liked it:]
    it was kinda interesting.
    'i believe in the power of love'
    - woo hoo strong line :]

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This was a really beautiful poem, very sweet and relaxing almost. You're a great writer.
    Keep it up!
    ~gabriella

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    First I must say upon reading this a warm feeling of peace and tranquility could be felt running through my veins ....

    The Spirit of love has so much power
    That stems from the root to the flower
    Preserve the vine and the fruit grows
    Like the beauty of life and the last rose
    ^^^
    You have woven a web of beauty here ... and I can't help but get caught in the magical feeling this stanza set off. Breath taking!

    He came into our lives like a prayer
    With the promise he could take us there
    With the hope of what lies above
    I believe in the great power of love
    ^^^
    This stanza makes me want to reach out and hug someone .... I hope the words of this masterpiece spread through-out the world ... Beautifully penned!

    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Wow... wow... wow
    It made me feel all tingly inside, great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    It was very pretty. One thing though....stanza-two spaces-stanza-two spaces-stanza-one space. I just thought I'd mention it. It caught my attention. Okay, anyways...It was a very pretty poem that uses that classic phrase, every rose has a thorn. It was great. Five.

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    It's really good...and i can see that there is a deeper meaning to it...it's not just about a flower..it's about our life...

  • 10 years ago

    by Angel Tears

    Nicely written, and very deep. It had a powerful meaning behind it. Thank you for sharing.