Comments : Our Flaws

  • 16 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    Loved it, very simple, elegant but with a strong message, Great write and keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I really enjoyed in this piece. It is worded nicely and it holds an amount of greatly expressed emotions that I can relate to. You are able to portray very heartfelt feelings within short poems and this piece is not an exception. I admire the simplicity and inner beauty of this poem.
    The first stanza is my favorite one.
    The whole poem has really good flow, too.

    Keep up!

  • 15 years ago

    by Conrad

    Simple, but in a good way. This had a message to tell, and you did it nicely. Everyone is flawed, its learning to deal, that is the real thing to get over.
    Nicely done.