Comments : The Bullets Are My Own Words

  • 15 years ago

    by beautifulybroken

    Omfg this is sooo good...i love it u should comment mine if you want.

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This is full of agony, full of dispair, full of the spark of every dream and full of each dream of happiness lost. Forever lost, forever gone, forever love - gone, so long!

    I feel your pain only too well. I too am licking wounds. Keep hope in your heart, because love will find you!!

    Well done

    Michael

  • 15 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    This was so touching, and full of emotion
    such a great flow, leaving the reader having to finish n_n
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Anne Garcia

    Wow, that's deep. I'm sorry for your hurt and agony. Hope it gets better soon.

    About your poem, it was very well "organized?" how should I say it... very well penned. Readers can feel what your feeling, and you've also chosen nice words. Great job!

  • 15 years ago

    by Blueleo

    I love it. It's a great discription of the love that is fueled by lust. It's a great feeling but deep inside we know that without the lust this love would fail. Yet it feels so real. We hesitate but know that it's not destined for more. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Such an emotional write...amazing job 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    Wow, I can totally relate! I just went through the same thing of two years...and I was thinking a lot of the same things! Nice work!!! :)