I like it... good job@

Really great ...love is just love

Marvellous, marvellous job

Beautiful poem!!! great rhyming!! i really love the emotions and reality!! great job!!

Aw!..that was sweet!...i really got what u were trying to say.
the last line is like really powerful and emotional. i totaly loved it.
awsum!
Aly

Overall nice good poem. You expressed strong feelings but I don't like few things.
Your choice of words could be better.
Core of this piece lack originality, all of your description were quite predictable.
Whole poem lacks punctuation, without punctuation signs it was hard to feel power of some lines, you could add more effective tone to the emotions with correct punctuation but instead of that you didn't use punctuation at all which left negative impression on me.
I don't understand why people write rhyming poems without unique rhymes, your rhyming was typical.
Word -gunna- totally threw me off.
You used word -heart- two times which was unnecessary.

I like the ending stanza and in some lines you expressed your self greatly.
This poem isn't bad but it is not one of the most powerful pieces I read.

Hi noha.well done. but don't hide, and i am ready to be your friend.

So many times have I been given false hope.
And for once I want to have it be true.
To throw caution fully to the wind.
Only wanting to believe souly in you.
^ Love This Stanzaa

Only thing i would recommend is in the last stanza where you wrote

So now I am gunna give it my all.
^ I would change gunna into going to.
This will make the poem also have better to it oother than that its a great poem very loving aand touching great job 5/5

I like this poem. Overall it made sense and I could relate to the feeling. I really liked the way you ended it.

I didn't really catch on to what you meant by the question why. Why what? Also, I think you could have done more with the title. Some more luring... enticing.

it was a good read. I've read a couple others, but this was my favorite. Thank you for your comment. I hope you keep writing and improving.

Daniel Ray Mulvany

Touchy one strong emotional expression

The ending to this was truly beautiful. I loved how you worded everything because it all flowed just nicely. I could feel the emotions you expressed because they hold so much meaning and made it easier for me to relate with you word. Well dont in creating this piece *5/5*

Wow. This was so darcie-esque (wallflower kinda girl). I enjoyed the image I got from this. This goes on my faves!

This is short, but a good poem...
"To have the smiles and the laughs.
No looking back on the moments only to cry.
To keep you in my heart forever.
And not having to ask the question why"
My favorite Part :]
Good Job

This is anotherr great poem nohaa
i just loved ittt

Well done and beautiful.
It didn't flow all the great, it was
kinda rocky in some places
and in otheres it didn't really fit to me.
Keep writing though well done.
<3Tay
5/5

A truly inspiring piece of poetry. a short and simple write, but still amazing. you are saying that you have been hurt lots so that you keep your soul hidden and now you do not want to stay silent anymore, you will share your secrets with the man you love? - that is my interpretation

a wonderful write and read

5/5

Keep Writing, lovely
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

Wonderful job, an enjoyable read 5/5!

Wow! a very expressive poem, and i lovedd it!!

So now I am going to give it my all.
Close my eyes and see the world through yours.
Let my heart and your hand be my guide.
No more secrets, no more closed doors.

i love those lines! my favorite!
please keep up the wonderful work! =]

U r truly amazing
i've read all ur stuff and u r sooooooo good at this
may allah bless u noha

Nice piece