Time stand still

by Brittney   Mar 11, 2008


Time stand still
so that we can make up
and not grow apart.
Clock on the wall stop
ticking so I can remember
the good and bad times
we had.
In sunshine or rain
you would kiss me
and every thing would
stop even my tears and the pain.
Hearts would stop when I
kiss your hands what happen
to use?
All I hear is the clock
and the sad song it plays
tick tock, tick tock.
Every time I hear that
sound it seems like the world
stops and remind me of you.
If I could have one more moment
in time I would make sure I was in your
arms. Time just stand still.

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  • 15 years ago

    by dezeraye

    I really like that peom....
    it makes sense.....
    and very well written..

    so i guess what im trying to say is that....

    GREAT JOB!

  • 15 years ago

    by dezeraye

    I really like that peom....
    it makes sense.....
    and very well written..

    so i guess what im trying to say is that....

    GREAT JOB!

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    I really like this , the feeling flowed smoothly .. pretty straight forward and a touching piece,indeed.
    the first few lines got me hooked. its really relatable , im sure.
    Great Work.

    ~Wake~

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