Well i liked it. i think it got your message across

Fine. jesse,

i like your happier poems better. a lot better. because i like you as a happy person (i am not saying for you to fake it) but you deserve to be happy....

there is a typo, but nbd....

smile. you still have lips that can do that. and don't ever go numb on me, it scares me...

great job.

Ur not unlovable!!!!!!!!ur the worlds best briend any1 can ever have!!!!!! many many people love u! just not the way u wiould like, but at least u have love! someday u'll find the right girl that can love u as much as u love her but no1 knows wen that'll be, just keep looking! just as ur looking don't 4get about the people that already love u!!! even the most horrible person in the world can be loved!!

well it's still a great poem, 5/5
xoxo
~me~

Very nice. Sad, but expected. You speak the truth and your comparison with the warning lables, completly true. Just wishing there was a way a broken heart could be repaired before the damage starts. Amazing poem. 5/5
xXx_Arielle_xXx

Love love love this idea of warning labels on hearts..wish i'd thought of that lol great job once again!

Great job jesse. no wonder she was inspired by it. it inspires me to talk to my crush. well actually hes more than a crush, but you know. so i want you to know you're a great poet even tho you may not think so. ( as i have read in ur profile) so whenever you wanna write me a poem, ur always welcome to!
oh, and i also accept tips from the guy's point of view.