Wow, I absolutely loved this poem. It was absolutely wonderful. I've read a lot of life poems and this one of the best ones I've read. The feeling in it was great and the flow fit just right. Great job! 5/5

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I like how you said that the sun sets like a burnig fire. This is a really great poem! I love the feeling in it and the words you used.
Keep it up!!

I liked this poem, It was peaceful to me and places me in that knid of mind set. 5*