Comments : This is the life

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Oh this is like wonderful!!! But sad to come to think of it too. I wish everthing could get better travis *sighs* but what can I say, idk really but a wonderful poem. I felt what you wanted to get across, yes? I love it!

    5/5 ^_^

    CourtneyxHolland
    Always loves you<3

  • 16 years ago

    by oNice

    That poem was gangsta yo! LOL! Good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Wow,
    this sounds like you really did choose your words carefully.
    But it needs,
    more.
    Idk,
    I've seen alot of stuff in my life.
    This just doesn't come close to being all you have to say.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ados

    Its a good story but it needs easier words to read

  • 15 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I like it. The edit is the usual. Capitalize here and there, gangsters becomes gangster's. It was a good poem. The flow was nice and the title was too. Five.

  • 15 years ago

    by Nicole

    I love it!
    Love,
    Amanda

  • 15 years ago

    by Sammerz

    I liked this it got a point acrosse and you choose your words very carefully loved it
    5/5
    Good Job hun!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Jes Miller

    I like it.....ever see Freedom Writers? Well this poem reminds me of that movie...in the movie, everyday they graduate, for they made it threw that day alive.....