Comments : Im Dead

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Wow, BRAVO DANIELLE!!!!! O.O I love this poem and I am so keeping it in mind...yes i have alot of thoughts racing through and i am sure not afraid of death...but i will always keepyou and my 4 other friends in mind telling me they love me and always will. But you know I can really see me in this poem, but it was just plain wonderful :D 5/5 but deserves higher missy -.-

    Your Sister CourtneyxHolland
    I Love You :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    I like your poem, but i can see through these lines how much you suffer, so you can open your heart for me as a new friend