OMG that is such a fab way of putting it

well done you put such pain it to words so beautifully

Hi your poem is so true I have been there in most of those aspects so great write well done .

Good write 5 out of 5

This was your best for the year! once again great job. keep on writing

S~ Searching for some reasoning, why you are in this terrible mess
When you feel you are to blame, Your life's taken over by stress

^^^ my favorite stanza btw.
5/5, your friend
~Forever Broken~

OMG I really love this poem.. It was awesome.. this is the poem I asked u cud I send too my b/f thanks alot ur sweet and very very very taltented.. Keep up the good work.

U are so creative...... with the word depression u create a poem......... wow amazing..... i'll never think twice for giving 5/5 for this one =)