Abstruse

by chelyxbaby28   Mar 14, 2008


Come on now
hold your breathe
close your eyes
theres nothing left

washing away
holding onto sand
here you are
and here I am
I have to make
you understand

everthing I was
I dont want to be
Right here in front
Of you is me

im lost
im hurt
im all alone
ive thrown away
what ive always known

give it time
ill make it through
I fell in deep
a time or two
Im giving up on
All I knew cause
all I want to know is you

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  • 11 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    "everthing I was
    I dont want to be
    Right here infront
    Of you, is me"

    give it time
    ill make it through
    I fell in deep
    a time or two
    Im giving up
    ON All I knew
    cos all I want
    to know is you

    i just reckon itll be easier to read that way

    more of a flow...
    cos when i was reading it i had to sorta like slow down

    but WOW! yuur poems have awsom flow...
    like mine are like just ugh they stop and start... but yuurs are amazing
    and theyre short, to the point and AMAZING

    i love yuur work.....

    5/5

    xxxxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Twistd StoRY

    5/5. Great job. I really like it!

  • 11 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Wow that poem is great. I can relate to it. good job!

  • 11 years ago

    by your love is mine

    Wow this poem was good. =)