This one I like more. You use the same as and sentence issues again then a few comma issues, but other than that I liked it. I like the last stanza. It was a creative thought. This one's a four.

Very good poem until the last stanza. The last stanza could've been more poetic. Otherwise, it was a beautiful poem. Good write!

I found a couple typos:

so soft and gentel. "gentle"

The sun is warm
it's rays apon me. (upon)

I have a suggestion about the ending:

it is so beautiful and
nothing else is like it. (there's nothing else......or nothing compares)

Other than that, it is short but sweet, wonderful imagery and meaningful. Nice job!

Very true. It was cute, i liked it. One thing.. its a lot like a lot of other poems... i noticed that. The same thoughts, but i liked the last stanza and i liked how you talked about someone you loved and related them together, i thought that was good. Well, nice job. It keep me interested.
*Chaotic Angel*

I really liked this. Once again you painted a lovely picture with your words. However I thought the last stanza sorta just made it drop off all of a sudden..
I still enjoyed it, though.

Well done,
-Paula.