Ooo very dark and haunting indeed. You captured the emotions very well and I felt captivated by your words and the scenes you created. I think you could add a lot more to this because it felt a lilttle infinished to me and I wanted to read more. You did do a very good job though and I enjoyed reading it and escaping my reality for a bit. Well done *5/5*

An amazing write. The beginning was wonderfully written and the title itself deserves a 5/5. This is definitely one of the best poems I've ever read in my life! The flow was flawless and everything in this piece flowed with itself, you know. The ending was perfect. 5/5.

Good job reading and critiquing! It was helpful :P

Dude that freakin rocks! I love the part about preparing to join the dead. excellent job 5*

Wonderfully written. Claps* Reminds me of some of my older work. I went through a serial killer phase. Dark work and death just pulls at my heart strings. It's beautiful. Anyways. Five.

Hmm, it was different. I liked it. I loved the word choice and the flow. 5/5

WOW great job dude u really nailed it
Great Vocab.
Great everything u really drew a dark thought in my mind u really got what t takes to be a poet i would love to read more of ur work

A rather good piece. It was very well written, and was worded brillaintly. It also had a great flow and great rhymes. I could really sense the character, I could almost hear them speaking the words ( I know that sounds a little over the top, but its true).

Brad

Nice poem. 5/5

Oh. Wow. I'm next to speechless! Throughout the poem, I could see everything play out in my head. It was amazing!