Wonderfully written Dennis, I am truly touched by this one. Did you just pick the theme and go with it, or is there some underlying reason for this one? I hate it when you worry me like this *raises eyebrow*

What a beautiful poem! You tell quite a sad but true story here. It's so hard to find our soul mate these days. Life gives us just too many things at once and our eyes and thoughts just can't pay attention to every single thing. Keep it up!

For those who "Believe" we are never really alone, you captured that sentiment, that feeling, silent comfort that is often unseen and underused. I enjoyed this poem on many levels, as someone who has felt alone and also as someone who believes if we reach out we are never truly alone. 5/5

Dennis, this one is so pretty that it brought tears to my eyes!! You're going on my favorites list!!

Dayum hun that's really deep! A glimpse atanother side of you that I really like! Love Erika

Amazing poem, beautiful and unique

Beautiful sweet & amazing ...I loved this poem and I do believe in it..
5/5

This is very beautiful, and i can relate to it in many ways. i seem to always be beside someone, bringing them off their knees. very good

5/5

I like the poem except for this part:
^She speaks unheard words of love
Words he cannot hear^

If they are unheard then we know he can not hear them. It seems as you have forced the rhyme in this part.

Other than that, I thought your flow was consistant throughout the rest of the piece. It is a beautifully penned dedication of love.

Thank you very much Rachel. You are absolutely correct...that doesn't sound right does it? I'll make a change to it right now :)

I really liked this poem was really touching
and the title only made it much more nicer
great jobX

Very amazing. instigated tears of my own! a timely reminder that we are never alone, even when it does appear that way. very sweet, and very beautiful (: great job (: 5/5!