Comments : When Life Rains (Collab with Diana)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    This is simply lovely, so beautiful and well written. What's the story behind it? Care to share the details with me? =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Diana

    Thank you so much for writing this with me sweetie, I think it turned out quite well. I never thought I'd be posting my own poems on here, you've been a great inspiration in helping me believe in myself enough to do it. You may never know how much I treasure our friendship, but I shall try finding the words to express it in future writings :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Erika

    What a beautiful write sweetheart, reminds me so much of you and I at times. I was hoping to be the first to do a collab with you, but this turned out great. I'm glad you're helping Diana with things, she deserves your attention too. Love Erika

  • 16 years ago

    by talesha

    A beautiful poem about a special friendship, I love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaymee

    The line between friendship and love is often difficult to see, and once crossed can lead in many directions. This is such a sweet poem, I enjoyed reading it very much! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What a cute collab. I especially love the last stanza:

    ^When circumstance surprises you
    In a most unexpected play
    Use the map that is drawn from love
    And you will find your way ^

    A perfect ending!

  • 16 years ago

    by jennifer

    This is so sweet. You both did a superb job on it.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Beautiful poem...great job here .....

  • 16 years ago

    by Heather

    Beautiful poem, i love it. you two did a very nice job. i love the imagery and metaphor put into it, very easily portrayed for oneself...great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Confessions

    <333
    Loved it :)