Comments : When Life Rains (Collab with Dennis)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    This is simply lovely, so beautiful and well written. What's the story behind it? Care to share the details with me? =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Erika

    This is a beautiful write, such a sweet poem about friendship and what it can lead to. You and Dennis write very well together, I hope you continue to collab in the future. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dennis

    You're very welcome sweetie...I enjoyed writing this with you very much! You give me far too much credit though...you've always had the talent. You just needed a little nudge to share it with the rest of the world is all :)

  • 16 years ago

    by talesha

    A beautiful poem about a special friendship, I love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaymee

    The line between friendship and love is often difficult to see, and once crossed can lead in many directions. This is such a sweet poem, I enjoyed reading it very much! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What a cute collab! I especially love the last stanza:

    ^When circumstance surprises you
    In a most unexpected play
    Use the map that is drawn from love
    And you will find your way ^

    A perfectly sweet ending!

  • 16 years ago

    by jennifer

    This is so sweet. You both did a superb job on it.
    5/5