It is a good poem. you could sort of picture this in your mind but then after a few seconds the picture just goes away. but it is a good poem other then that <33

Omg
Good poem
I can relate
I'm so printing it. =]
5/5

Good poem. It was nicely written and the flow was decent. It seemed to lack something though. I really loved the concept regardless. It was a beautiful feeling to have while reading it :)

Awww!! that i so sad. i give it a 5/5

Good aly

Omg this is the cutest poem ever i love it!!