Nitin
What a sad piece yet there is also hope. The imagery and word choices are great.

This story will fade in coming days
Mornings will get bright once again
Time doesn't stand still for anyone
And nights would bring back my pain

Sometimes life gives us nothing but pain and sadness. The pain can be felt from the words you have penned. This stanza there is a small ray of hope for something better to come.

Deep inside this shell there's hope
For days of love that lay ahead
Pain can't be all that life brings me
From my yesterdays I have fled

Here you turn your back on the pain from yesterday. I love the entire piece. My wish for you is that all your yesterdays and tomorrows always be bright and full of love and happiness.
Love Cindy

Deep inside this shell there's hope
For days of love that lay ahead
Pain can't be all that life brings me
From my yesterdays I have fled

My favorite stanza, Nitin.
May all your tomorows be bright, my sweet friend!

Hugs,

Ingrid

Amazing lines you have written, a ray of hope fighting the grave emotions, wonderful theme.Loved it , You rock :)

Take care
Chavii.

This story will fade in coming days
Mornings will get bright once again
Time doesn't stand still for anyone
And nights would bring back my pain
^^^
Just when we think we have moved past the pain, and days begin to get brighter ... night creeps in, bringing back the shadows of yesterdays that still haunt our souls.

Pain of the heart & mind -emotionally- I think is the biggest pain one can suffer threw. It can't be healed with a bandage nor cured with medications ... it lays in our heart and mind and rips us apart....

Sad yet wonderfully expressed poem of pain and sadness.
Well done Nitin

~Hugs~
Luanne

Well done on the title challenge...congrats on placing!

"Inside this shell there's a broken heart
Waiting to beat again someday
Days have spilled from my life like sand
Blending storms of past coming my way "

^ beautiful verse....sad but hopeful...love it!

What a deeply moving piece this was. Really enjoyed the deep emotions that you have expressed. Many of us want to forget and move on from yesterdays and i feel that many can relate to what you have penned.

What an awesome ending! You did an excellent job on this piece. You get extra credit since English is not your first language!

Aww i very touching piece. lot of emotion in this poem.. 5/5 xo

Im totally going through ur poem right now...thanx for writing it

Another fantastic poem. It touches the heart. Great way to express your emotions. Truly amazing!

Wow... amazing piece. Your words just get better and better. I'm speechless.

Take care

Very nicely written poem Nitin! 5/5

Luv

Nitin!

lovely to see your work, as always. the depth of your words is so strong, it really brings the feelings on so beautifully.

what matters is what is inside the shell, Nitin. As long as that remains what it is, there is always hope.

luck and peace
shobhana

I love this poem! your really good. keep it up!