I love it

it's nothing i can relate to right now but i remember a time when i could.

keep writing!

I love it

it's nothing i can relate to right now but i remember a time when i could.

keep writing!

I love this one too

This was a well written poem, I feel, however, I didn't much care for it. Although it had good rhythm, as well as good rhymes and was deep, I couldn't really...feel it I guess. I just think that the piece wasn't as alive as it could have been. Sorry.

Brad