Comments : TheLossOfTwoLifes.

  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    Awwwww thats so sad i started to cry!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by XLOSTxxANDxxWANDERINGX

    Omg thats so sad 5/5 though great

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Oh wow. that's really an amazing poem. sometimes, sad poems are hard to make short. but you really did an amazing job of it...keep up the great work

  • 16 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    Wow...i started to cry! very moving and perfectly written... 5/5 on this one

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    That was really powerful, like really powerful, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by DontForgetTonight

    That is amazingly written, sent shivers down my spine (: 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Wow, very powerful and depressing poem but still a 5/5...i hope this isn't a true story u know
    xoxo
    ~me~

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Omfg!! mthat was so damn sad...that is sad that parents make their children do what they do...make them feel like nothing. broken glass, broken,useless and despaired!! But i love this poem, you def got your point across lol...!!!
    CourtneyxHolland

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    This was really good!!!!!!.......great writter keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by MusicIsMyBoyfriendx3

    Really goodd.

    -xtina

  • 16 years ago

    by sandy

    Wow ... very strong... you're very good keep writing hun

  • 16 years ago

    by Confined

    Well i no everyone else sed this lol but it tis sad indeed =P tis gewd tho lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    Awe thats deep for sure good job!