Awww that wuz so cute!!! good job :-D

Awww...i love this its great.....amazing....wow...keep it up shes verry lucky

''Your loved by me as a person,
I want you whole and true,
you've inspired the rest of my life,
As if there was only me and you.''

That was sooooooooo sweet & adorable ...I loved it 5/5

Great job hunny

A good poem, you wear your heart on your sleeve, 5/5

Aw!..this was really really sweet!!!!...i totaly loved this one!!!!!!!...
"There are many people out there,
Male and female alike,
You are the one my hearts chosen,
To follow forever in the night"
^^ very nice!!..specially the last two lines, that is very sweet. it shows that our hearts choose who we want to be with, not we chose!..

"Your loved by me as a person,
I want you whole and true,
you've inspired the rest of my life,
As if there was only me and you"
^^that is also very sweet! it shows that love is unconditional, that it doesnt matter who you are. they love u for who u r.
i specially love the last line...it was a great way to end the poem...very sweet and emotional!!!...hehe.. very romantical.!
lol
Aly
5/5

Omg, this was so good and so sweet and so perfect that im sitting here trying to figure out the right words to say to how amazing that was. gr8 job
5/5

Your very good at this kind of poetry =] another beautiful job.

The way you portray yourself with your words proves that your a caring and loving person, very good job!

The flow was good once again and you wrote the overall piece very well

I LOVED reading this...A lovely poem of love. Wonderfully expressed :)

Good job!
Olwin.