That is a very powerful poem!
i always feel no1 cares but there is always someone that does you just dont want to believe it...
great writing!
xo

Finally lost in my own dark solitary shell
Wishing an aiding hand would cast darkness away
The gates of darkness are open, might go to hell
If only a person in this world would want me to stay...

^^Friends without care, life would be shallow..Try to pick up small pieces [happy memories] left in your life and learn to trust people again..Your poem is rather sad yet wonderfully expressed..Probably one of the most touching poems in regards with friends i have ever read and will re-read many times..

Excellent Job..5/5

Great poem very descriptive 5/5

Beautiful and strong ,flow was nice and rhyme good too
well done
5/5

Wow, i can really relate to this poem!

i loved the way it flowed so well, and it drew me in making me want to carry on reading!

fake friends are the worst, and it can take a very big sudden thing to make you see they were never real.

Well done 5/5

Keep it up!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Wonderful expression.
you have a wonderful way of expressing you feelings so easily comprehendable. its wonderful.

Wow..