I laid in the sun today. and i didn't feel it. does that answer your question?

Thats so good!
i love it <3
5/5

"But what good is a memory
When painful memories all you feel"

so true. i loved these lines! :)

I liked it. I liked how it jumped back and forth from the good things to the bad. it had a great flow and word choice. i made me feel like i was there going through the emotions. 5/5

Beautiful poem but just remeber...

"Everyone wants happyness,
no one wants pain.
But you can't have a rainbow,
without a little rain."

so true and don't forget it :) 5/5
xoxo
~me~