Great language use and works really well with the poem, keep it up x

Well, I love the title and I believe this will be great
As my prediction, this is really thoughtful and looked a bit sad...
Is this your experience, I believe it's true...
I can relate to it

"But in the end, I realize maybe I'm just one trick pony"
This one is very unique!!!

Great one!!!

Nice one , u did hard work, nice feeling 5 /5

Great job.so far this is the one i like the most. 5/5

The last line was filled with such emotion and the whole poem reflecting strength and power. The title really captured my eye so I was eager to read more and the poem just fit everything flawlessly. The flow was great and nothing seemed forced while the imagery just blew me away and completed the poem for me. Well done *5/5*

I really likeyour style this poem would make great song lyrics also

The poem is okay over all but it contains a lot of grammar mistakes which don’t do any good to the poem. Try to correct them.
I really like the first stanza, it's the best. Again you've made some real strong expressions so that's great. (: