Lovely sad penned you portrait here, the question mark need some answer, the feeling that he hold close, would he let it be...?

I can relate to your sentiment, your words, and that is what makes good poetry. This poem has a lot of truth in it. Well written!!! 5/5

That describes you perfectly hun, it's so you! Sometimes you are too kind and patient for your own good, but I wouldn't want you to change one bit :)

This poem sounds like me Dennis. Love all your poems they are really good!

That doesn't sound like something a guy would write at all. Most guys are too macho to admit feelings like that! I loved it! 5/5

Dennis Whatever you write is great :) I love all your poems and this is another great one of yours...5/5

Wow Dennis! The more I read from you, the more I want to see. You are clearly not the average guy =]
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That was so poignant Dennis! You're really in touch with your masculine 'I don't have to pretend not to have emotions' self! I guess most sensitive caring men have been there, true love means not being selfish as the woman you love falls for yet another turd brain! Love Erika

Loved the last stanza... nice poem

This is a great poem , well done , it reminds me of my own love ...

I love it!!..good job!.u r very descriptive with your words.it's so powerfull...wow
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That was a great poem, i loved how you put feeling into it. great job. ~Silent Angel~

Another masterpiece. it may not rhyme in parts, but all poems dont need all rhyme haha. i really like this poem, again, it reminds me of some past haunts haha. great work!

Hey,
another great poem, its almost as if everything you write is good. even without rhyming, its still perfect. keep it up!
kisses stephanie

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That's so beautifully written..Loved it..very sad & touching..
& the last stanza is..just wow <33

Annnnd it's now on my favourite poems list =]