Wow, Amazing write! You wrote the entire poem very well, I love the form/ structure. I try writing it in that kinda form but sometimes it doesn't come out like yours. It's amazing!

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece with us poets.

5/5 you deserve it!

Wow....these lines are true.

Don't listen as I cry at night.
I'll get over it with time.
It's just another broken heart,
Not like I committed a crime.

Just leave him behind,
Move on to someone new.
Don't worry, this is what love is like.
It will all happen again to you.

Keep it up

Nice, it was simple and has a good concept. Great write, very well conveyed in every line.

Keep it up
Veamm

"These tears in my eyes?
Are memories that I'll wipe away.
I'll forget everything that I felt
And all that we used to say."

no freaking joke i love these lines this poem said so much that a lot of ppl can relate to but at the same time its only you great job!5/5

laura

I gotta love the first few lines...you know you sound like me...lol

Everything is all right.
Suck it up, don't you dare cry.
Its just another lost love
Thats what happens when you actually try.

Another amazing poem :) I love your stuff :)