Straight up poem with nice rhymes and flow. Good write. 5/5.

What a beautiful love poem...this is exactly how love is supposed to be!

The line "So just take your hand in mine" doesn't sound right to me though...maybe put your hand in mine...or wrap your hand in mine? Or is that just how you youngins say it these days? :)

Regardless of my nitpicking...a very sweet poem that left a smile on my face 5/5

Look into my eyes
What do you see?
Is it a tortured soul?
Or is it just me..

Nice start to a good poem

The third stanza which starts with There are, all 4 lines start this way. This would work for me if this format was repeated later in the poem. Other than that I like it.

I may be new at poem writing, but that was beautiful

I liked ur poem, i would be really grateful if u saw mine they are more like words, and post ur comments ...this will really help me
thanks alot
lina

I love this lines:

There are a few things I need to say
There are a few things I want you to know
There are reasons for you to stay
There are things I wish to show

its great i really love it,.^_^

I think that was a very nice poem! :D I don't know what to say more, but I really liked it! :3

Great poem! I really liked it. Keep it up 5/5