Comments : Tears of Sanity

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    OMG! This poem was simply amazing! I loved the emotion you put into it. I can really relate to it. This guy raped me a few months ago and when ever I think of him I cry beyond my control. Ppl don't realize that it's all I can do to cope with how I feel. I really appreciate this poem.

    I cry for you
    I cry for me
    I cry to keep
    My sanity

    ^^^ my favorite stanza. You have a lot of talent as a poet and this stanza proves it. Wonderful job, keep writing. 5/5
    kat

  • 16 years ago

    by Dennis

    Another amazing write from you young lady! I'm quite surprised you have so few poems submitted considering how long you've been a member...not that I have any room to talk on that subject :)

    I wish I could tell you that things get much easier as you grow older...but I can't. You just grow numb to certain emotions and don't let them show so much anymore.

    Keep writing the great poems! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xClarax

    I simply love the way this poem is written, simple, yet with such feeling!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Wilburn

    I cry for you
    I cry for me
    I cry to keep
    My sanity

    Beautiful poem many would relate too. I like this verse best.